TEACHERS COMMENTS

Kamika, well done for adding some diary styled accounts of work in progress. I like the range of performer and location shots you have included. You now need to add brief notes to outline what each photo shows (I can see that you have some after all of the photos). Your textual analysis examples are well considered and show good research into similar texts. It would be good if you could add a Youtube link for each text. In addition you should work through the Blog checklist given to get up to speed with other tasks i.e. screen shots of editing work.